Oh you've posted the the first chapter! It's very promising though some parts made me rather sad

"Well, we didn't make it to Mordor, that's one way of looking at it," Sam interrupts. But Sam does not interrupt Frodo. Or at least, he never has, but things have changed now, Frodo understands at once.

And this

even surrounded by armed men, Sam is still afraid of him.

And

and Sam doesn't seem much interested in listening.

Poor Frodo, poor Sam.