I actually seldom get through more than thirty seconds or so of recording without making some mistake or other! A lot more time goes into editing than anything else. But the truth is I had an easier time on this one than I usually do because your sentences have such a nice natural flow to them.

Anyway, very pleased you like the recording! And thanks for pointing out the bit with the POV breaks - both themadlurker (ack I forgot to credit her for beta listening!) and I got a kick out of that.