Oh, thank you for this; I really like what you've done with it, especially the use you made of the audio from the actual episode, which captures the ugly intrusiveness of those thoughts much more clearly than anything I could have done with the text. It's very nicely done.

(Also, this sounds a bit ridiculous, but I'm so pleased to hear that the text sounds natural in your lovely North American accent! After I'd written it, I was concerned that I had allowed my own unKaylee-like English accent to shape her voice; but it doesn't come across that way in your reading, which makes me happy.)