Oh, Sophie! You wrote it after all! I am so thrilled. This is so well-written and believable.

The details of the environment are so compelling and sound so right, and also get the feeling of a young person trying out a foreign country. I really like the whole thing.

My daughter was in Prague last January, and she saw Elijah's picture hanging in a coffee shop there. She tried to take a photo of it, but it didn't come out. (She explained to the two students with her that it wasn't for her, it was for her mother, which seemed even geekier to them. What kids won't do for their parents sometimes...)

Thanks again. See, you CAN write RPF!