Oh, this all has to do with a different fic, one I haven't posted any of yet; Claudia's taking a look at it now. And I'm seeking more general advice for other things I might want to write in the future.

"A Brief Adventure" is not done yet and has been stalled for a while, which is a little troubling in itself. On the bright side, it has no looming potential Mary Sues. Kind of a lot of OCs maybe, but none of them threatening to hijack the story. It's so nice to know you're enjoying it so far!