drabbles - PWP for Dana

[sophinisba]

200 unbetaed words again, R [edit - one reader thinks NC-17, I'm not sure], four paragraphs, 50 words each. For danachan's request for Frodo/Pippin (join in, y'all!) and with the prompts "loud" and "hot".



Pippin is quieter than Frodo had expected. In any other situation he can't keep his mouth shut. Well, it's hanging open now, but he isn't making any real noise. Just breathing, gasping a bit. No words, certainly no screams. It's almost disappointing. Frodo's used to getting more of a reaction.

And Frodo, who's often accused (by Merry, mostly) of being loud in this particular situation (the one Pippin's in now), has all he can do to keep his mouth open wide, to keep breathing. He tries not to moan, likes to think he can maintain more control than Peregrin Took.

Pippin's fingers twist through Frodo's curls but don't tighten, don't pull, and his touch is cool and light like Merry's has never, ever been. And Frodo wonders just why he and Pippin have never done this before. Pippin's cock in Frodo's mouth is a good deal more... pressing, insistent. Hot.

When Pippin finally cries out and lets go (and pulls tight) and comes hard, that's hotter still, which is not to say that Frodo minds. He swallows, sucks, licks, and when he's got his mouth free again, murmurs, "Nothing at all like him." And Merry, watching from the bed, agrees.

Comments

[danachan.livejournal.com]

I just. Words. Fail me. Hot and perfect and I love you and oh. Oh. *whimper* *incoherent flail and omg* Thank you thank you thank you. That? Was perfect and I know I'm supposed to be incoherent but I still want you to know just how much this has, uh, affected me.

omg

I'll be in my bunk.

[sophinisba]

Heh.

I know you saw the first three parts before I posted, but I wanted the last one to be a little bit of a surprise, at least. I'm happy it's had the desired effect.

♥

[aprilkat.livejournal.com]

Well, aren't those just lovely images. You've managed to pack a wallop in just a few words!

[sophinisba]

It seemed important to get straight to the porn point on this one. Thank you for reading. :D

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

Wonderful. I'm just gobsmacked.

[sophinisba]

Thank you! I'm so pleased that you've also joined in!

[claudia603.livejournal.com]

Oh, my!!! The ultimate in cousin!love! *blushes*

[sophinisba]

Thank you. We're running a campaign for more porn in cousin!fic. Hope everyone who's able will do her part.

[i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com]

Oh, Frodo/Pippin with Frodo/Merry and Pippin/Merry. Those three are some hobbits, huh. :)

[sophinisba]

You know, I don't have an OTP in this fandom, but the cousins are kind of my OT3. Thanks for reading, sweetie.

[layne67.livejournal.com]

Honey, methinks that this is already NC-17 territories :D

*loves*

[sophinisba]

You think so? For me it's a little on the verge, but I edited the post to warn for porn.

So glad you liked it! :D

[slightlytookish]

It's all Dana's fault that Pippin/Frodo is my second favorite pairing. And this was quite wonderful :)

[sophinisba]

There is so very much that we have to blame on Dana.

Thank you very much. This was great fun to do.

[mariole.livejournal.com]

In any other situation he can't keep his mouth shut.

Hee! VERY sexy!

[sophinisba]

Thank you, dear. I'm trying to get up the nerve to write some serious porn this week.

[absolutefiction.livejournal.com]

ohmygod i love this! thank you for writing this and sharing. so many things i like. besides the hot hotishness. i love this:

He tries not to moan, likes to think he can maintain more control than Peregrin Took.

so. frodo.

and this:

And Merry, watching from the bed, agrees.

such a great twist to the ending.

and this:

he's got his mouth free again, murmurs, "Nothing at all like him."

so naughty!

and this:

Pippin's cock in Frodo's mouth is a good deal more... pressing, insistent. Hot.

ngh.

[sophinisba]

Thank you so much!! I love it when you stop by to check out a hobbit fic. I had fun writing this one (IMing with Dana and sending her lines of it as I went along) and I like that it's pretty explicit, but I wish I were better about getting into the really porny details like you do. I love it when you write about Casey's pubic hair, for instance.

I'm so happy that you liked the ending of this. I always like it when a very short fic can give you a little bit of a surprise. Thank you again!

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

One of the fun things about remixes is reading through people's stories.

The above fact has nothing to do with anything. :D

Oh, this is gloriously hot, and so very them.

[sophinisba]

Hmmm, I wonder what could have brought you back here? *ponders mystery*

Thanks for your comment. This was probably the quickest and least stressful porn I ever wrote, so it's a good memory and nice to come back to. :D