Sophinisba Solis (
sophinisba) wrote2006-07-19 08:39 pm
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drabbles - PWP for Dana
200 unbetaed words again, R [edit - one reader thinks NC-17, I'm not sure], four paragraphs, 50 words each. For
danachan's request for Frodo/Pippin (join in, y'all!) and with the prompts "loud" and "hot".
Pippin is quieter than Frodo had expected. In any other situation he can't keep his mouth shut. Well, it's hanging open now, but he isn't making any real noise. Just breathing, gasping a bit. No words, certainly no screams. It's almost disappointing. Frodo's used to getting more of a reaction.
And Frodo, who's often accused (by Merry, mostly) of being loud in this particular situation (the one Pippin's in now), has all he can do to keep his mouth open wide, to keep breathing. He tries not to moan, likes to think he can maintain more control than Peregrin Took.
Pippin's fingers twist through Frodo's curls but don't tighten, don't pull, and his touch is cool and light like Merry's has never, ever been. And Frodo wonders just why he and Pippin have never done this before. Pippin's cock in Frodo's mouth is a good deal more... pressing, insistent. Hot.
When Pippin finally cries out and lets go (and pulls tight) and comes hard, that's hotter still, which is not to say that Frodo minds. He swallows, sucks, licks, and when he's got his mouth free again, murmurs, "Nothing at all like him." And Merry, watching from the bed, agrees.
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Pippin is quieter than Frodo had expected. In any other situation he can't keep his mouth shut. Well, it's hanging open now, but he isn't making any real noise. Just breathing, gasping a bit. No words, certainly no screams. It's almost disappointing. Frodo's used to getting more of a reaction.
And Frodo, who's often accused (by Merry, mostly) of being loud in this particular situation (the one Pippin's in now), has all he can do to keep his mouth open wide, to keep breathing. He tries not to moan, likes to think he can maintain more control than Peregrin Took.
Pippin's fingers twist through Frodo's curls but don't tighten, don't pull, and his touch is cool and light like Merry's has never, ever been. And Frodo wonders just why he and Pippin have never done this before. Pippin's cock in Frodo's mouth is a good deal more... pressing, insistent. Hot.
When Pippin finally cries out and lets go (and pulls tight) and comes hard, that's hotter still, which is not to say that Frodo minds. He swallows, sucks, licks, and when he's got his mouth free again, murmurs, "Nothing at all like him." And Merry, watching from the bed, agrees.
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*loves*
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So glad you liked it! :D